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This week's words are:
filthy
guess
convenience
Fiona brushed her hair back from her face. With a sigh, she picked up the last bag of trash and looked around the cellar. Even with all the clutter hauled away, the cavernous room was still filthy. It would take a month of scrubbing to get everything clean. But, she was determined to get it done. The thought of having a large storage area after working out of the small storefront she and Bucky were used to was worth any amount of work.
She climbed the steps, forcing one foot in front of another. I swear, these bags gain a pound with each step I take. She didn't even want to know how many large green plastic bags she had toted up these steps today. Enough to nearly fill the dumpster Gary had insisted Golden Waste install right at the back door. She smiled as she thought of the argument that had caused. How tacky it was! But, she hated to admit he was right. After all, it was temporary and it saved umpteen dozen steps. Right now, she guessed convenience won out over aesthetics.
The bag joined its compatriots and she swung the lid closed with a satisfying clang. Mission accomplished, she congratulated herself. A quick sweep to get up the worse of the dirt on the floor and she would call it a day. Tomorrow would be soon enough to tackle the scrubbing.
As always, she double-checked to make sure the block holding the cellar door was in place before she descended. And, as always, she reminded herself they had to get the lock fixed. The last thing they needed was someone accidentally getting locked down there.
The broom whisked against the cement floor and Fiona lost herself in mentally decorating and stocking the room. A scraping sound from the top of the stairs brought her back to the present. The door slammed shut and high-heeled footsteps hurried across the tile of the kitchen floor.
"Hey!" Fiona dropped the broom and rushed up the steps. Without hope, she twisted the door handle. She beat on the heavy wood with her fists.
"Oh, bother!"
Well, she'd just call Gary or Bucky and they would come let her out. Then she would worry about who had locked her in. She had a feeling she already knew though. Visions of Claudia's red stiletto shoes flashed through her mind.
Her cell phone. Her gaze traveled around the cellar before she remembered, with a sinking in the pit of her stomach, she had left it in her jacket pocket. The same jacket that was hanging on the kitchen chair, just five feet away from her. On the other side of the locked door.
Nice description of the room with some foreshadowing of the end of the chapter
ReplyDeletescary to have a means of escape so close but so far
Really enojoyed this-I wanted my story to have an open ending without a resolution but I thought of the other ending and couldn't do it. You have great descriptions and this seems like it could really happen. I think you have a great chance of being a writer.
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of writing Judy. I enjoyed reading it. Amazing how you come up with a great story line using those three words.
ReplyDeleteGreat story! Can't wait to find out why Claudia would lock her in the basement.
ReplyDeleteThis was worth waiting for. Are you reallly going to link all the Fiona's together into something, or does she just have the most miserable luck and meanest friends in the world? (I guess what I'm asking is, is Bone what it takes to kick your butt into getting to work on your novel?)
ReplyDeleteI love that you tie them all together... even though each story is great on its own.
ReplyDeleteOnce again hooked me.
This is random. But I was reminded of the setting for the Audrey Hepburn movie Wait Until Dark, which is one of my favorite movies.
ReplyDeleteI, too, am looking forward to a confrontation with Claudia.
will we find out more or be left hanging in suspense. Great writing!
ReplyDeleteNice! I always like finding out what is happening in the life of Fiona!
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